The pic on the home page is not remotely related to the area where our offices are located or with our “brand”.
>> We will change the photo
The photos off our practice waiting rooms are not inviting at all. Maybe different angles would be better? As far as Cary goes, suite 200 looks less clinical so a pic of that waiting room might be a better option.
>> Need photos
The menu on the upper left pulls up to a black background and isn’t inviting me to venture futher into the subheadings. It’s offensive visually and I want to immediately X out.
>> Please clarify – Top black bar will only visible in editor mode
The footer is not clear. The subheadings do not stand out enough to see them.
>> we will adjust this
The verbiage on most of the sub headers is terrible. For example ” Our NC porcelain veneers” , “porcelain dental crowns”, ” the bad breath should subside with proper Raleigh and Cary NC dental treatment.”.
>> Please clarify
That being said, I understand this is all formatted this way to provide optimum engine search ratings, however it sounds so commercial to a lay person. If I were searching for a dentist I would probably stay away from this one for these reasons. It’s not personal. It doesn’t refer to a dentist or group of dentists that you can build a relationship with but it presents it as a business entity that you “hire” to do a service, for lack of a better term.
When it comes to health whether oral or physical, patients want to build a trust relationship with their practitioner and I don’t think we present our practices in that manner with this website.
Background pic is very pretty but looks like we are at the beach,
>> Refer to first item
Siler City hours on Fridays?,
>> What are the Friday Hours?
Does Raleigh Location need picture of the building,
>>Need photo
Would Braces, Invisalign and Orthodontics be in the Cosmetic column?, Do you need two different ones (Braces and Orthodontics), Does Dr. Ingersoll need to be under Dentist, Since he is not here right now?, Do you need to add Dr. Watson and Dr. A. Smith under dentist?, Need to add Candace onto Siler City team.
>>Need confirmation/answers to these questions
I agree…while the beach scene is nice, I don’t think it reflects any of our locations.
>> see first item
-The WHY US tab….need to add Chapel Hill
>> done – added
OUR SERVICES:
-Not sure if we want to say that we’ve been treating smiles since 1984 (I don'[t even know if some of the doctors were even born by 1984!)
>> done- changed to “for many years”
I’m sure this was written for SEO optimization, correct? If so, then I guess we need to leave it, but I”m not crazy about how it reads. (add Chapel Hill)
Ready for a personalized Raleigh, Cary and Siler City cosmetic dentistry makeover? Royal Oak Dental Group is the Raleigh, Cary and Siler City, NC cosmetic dentist you should trust for total dental health and a winning smile. They can help you design a custom plan to renew and brighten your smile, using one or a combination of cosmetic dental procedures, including:.
Add oral surgery with sedation
>> done – added as another bullet
DENTAL PROBLEMS
General Dentistry work being performedWhat bugs you most about your smile? Do you have spaces between your teeth that keep you from smiling? Maybe a tooth or two seems out of place or draws unwanted attention. Maybe your smile doesn’t have that same bright white sparkle it used to have. Or, you could be experiencing pain from cavities, tooth decay or gingivitis (Please correct spacing/wording of this paragraph)
>> done
PATIENT RESOURCES
I’d change the photo that appears there
>> done
Not sure if anything is supposed to happen when I click on the bullet list (i.e., What to expect during consultation)
>>
all bullets linked – need page content for
1. What to expect during the initial consultation
2. Our dental practice’s videos
MEET DOCTORS
Should we have family photos of the docs as well?
>> Need answer
Should we remove Dr. Ingersoll?
>> Need answer
We need to add Aaron Smith ADDED and Rob Watson
>> Need Bio & photos – Watson
We need to edit letter from Aaron Smith
>> Need the updated text
New photos (perhaps professional photographer) of all doctors/team members
>> Need the updated photos
Replace abstract photos with more relevant photos (i.e., coffee maker, etc.)
>> Which pages had the photos that need to be replaced?
Add links for Invisalign, Care Credit, etc.?
>> We will add a small section right below Why Us?/Dental Care Trust on homepage to add these logos.
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