1. Changes to the first section w/ Preggo in Undies
Make the phrases “Live….., Laugh…, & Love…” stand out more
Too many feathers! Please lessen.
2. Changes to the second section w/ Love Yourself
Change the paragraph:
Amare Concierge is an innovative women’s health practice that celebrates what being a complete woman is all about. This is a practice where Dr. Burch always puts women first and foremost to create a luxurious personalized experience. Our holistic approach to women’s wellness addresses the mind, body and soul. At Amare Concierge, you are more than a patient, you will feel as if you’re part of Dr. Burch’s family.
Not quite convinced? Here are a few testimonials from real women on how Dr. Burch has changed their lives.
3.Changes to the third section w/ Draion Burch DO FACOOG
Put (Dr. Drai) after my name. Turn my name WHITE.
Amare Concierge is the premier standard of comprehensive women’s healthcare that provides the modern woman, like yourself, a supportive environment where you can be truly HAPPY. Renowned board-certified OBGYN Draion M. Burch DO, FACOOG is always committed to the best possible personalized care he can provide. If you can dream it, you can have it. Dr. Burch cherished all the moments he spends with his patients making sure every one of his clients are truly cared for and LOVED.
“In my 10 years of practicing medicine, I have learned that relationships are very important to women of all ages. Once I help them heal these relationships, good health always follows. My secret to optimal health- Love conquers all. Women have to love themselves first before loving others.”
-Dr. Drai
Make the quote stand out MORE.
Make the Logos smaller and closer together. They need to be WHITE.
4. Changes to the 4th section Happy Women
Remove the names of the couples
General Comments:
Where’s the pink that’s in the brand look book?
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