Hello Dr. Amir Ashrafi & Dr. Amir Norbaksh,
I went ahead and made a few adjustments since I feel we are very close to really hitting it out of the park.
I’ve attached 2 revisions, let me know what you think.
– I changed the blue to be a lot lighter, I definitely understand where you’re coming from. I also tried to make it so that your logo/brand will contrast well against it. (see footer)
– I put “Meet our Team” on the hero so that it would be at the forefront so that in a way we are introducing you two and we already have testimonials as its separate section.
– For the feature box section, I decided to go with a more science-y texture. If we left it blank, it would blend into the next section. I felt like a science-y texture would be less distracting as opposed to putting in people in the background. The goal is to add texture while making sure the boxes/information is the focal point.
-I went with a literal change with your notes on the feature boxes. As for the other revision, I went with something that reinforced your brand a little bit. The idea is that if you hover over the hexagon, you would get the blurb and if you click the hexagon, it would re-route you to a specific page within your site.
i got it. He's on my f/u for this month.
2017-03-10 | belinda.t
Update on account? Want me to contact?
2016-09-20 | danny.n
I'll send him a f/u towards end of month. Will update you.
2016-09-19 | belinda.t
Should I mark this on my calendar for 9 months, are you going to contact?
2016-03-10 | danny.n
"Thank u so much Danny. You are truly a professional and a gentleman. Sent from my iPhone"
2016-03-10 | danny.n
responded back letting Dr know we wish all the best and to let us know when they are ready to continue with the launch along with their business.
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